Let's see, it's been awhile since I've written an entry. Here are the current stats.
Writing: Slow and steady, I am working on revising the novel. I am re-writing points of views so it's about re-shaping the way the story is being told. Not sure yet, if it's working but I'll just plug through until I've made a solid pass across the whole manuscript.
Health: Had my first appointment with a naturopathic doctor to figure out the pain that I've been dealing with. She's recommended a restrictive diet to weed out the possibility of food allergies and some herbs to help tonify organ functions. I am feeling positive and glad about being pro-active about my health. Let's see how it all sorts out.
Music: Went to see Blue October play live at Irving Plaza on Saturday. Their music live is so worth the price of a ticket! The group has some rabid fans but the best part of that is the ability to listen to the whole audience singing/shouting/carrying along with music. Frontman Justin Furstenfeld has such a great growl and when the music crescendoes, the audience is riding along with that wave. Irving Plaza was a bit too small for this group's crowd but I was able to grab a spot near an open door, that helped keep my claustrophobia at bay. His rendition of Bleed Out (from his new album) was so genuine and heartfelt that I could feel the intention of the song down to my toes. He also sang the first song that turned me onto this group Hate Me. I also wanted to mention the song Fear, the version that he sang at Irving gave me the chills. The song was sung with a full open voice..really beautifully done. I can't stop listening to their music. Hoorah!!
I think that's all I have for now. I have to get some sleep. Enjoy!!
On Saturday, I went to see Ethan Coen's play, Women or Nothingplaying at Atlantic Theater Company, Linda Gross Theater. The play is about a lesbian couple who decide they want a child so desperately that they will pick a co-worker to sleep with to make it happen. The writing is quick and funny and at times it made me laugh so hard that I could hardly hear the next lines. Some of the monologues went too long but for the most part they held their own.
Now as far as the story arc is concerned, that's a little more problematic for me. I don't think the story needed the mother to come into the mix. Although Deborah Rush as Dorene was funny...I almost think Chuck's revelations (played by Robert Beitzel) could have been confessed to Laura the morning after. It would have created a powerful intimate moment. And the revelation could have had more of a payoff because of the high expectations set up in the beginning. The stakes could even have been raised if part of the revelation was that Chuck had a vasectomy. If Coen had used that tactic, then the blow out between Laura (played by Susan Pourfar) and Gretchen (played by Halley Feiffer) could have been phenomenal. It would have given the audience a little more scope to their relationship perhaps seeing the cracks created by their decision. All this analysis after the fact is just another possibility. My writer's brain hardly ever turns off so the critique is based on the love of the craft.
Susan Pourfar as Laura definitely played the part of high-strung creative. At times, the affected accent was bit distracting but Pourfar's portrayal of Laura made her, by far, my favorite character. Robert Bietzel as Chuck was really well done. I just wish he had more lines during his scene with Laura. However, his scene with Dorene was so nuanced and vulnerable that I really enjoyed his performance. Halley Feiffer as Gretchen was my least favorite character. In her case, I think it had more to do with the way the character was written than with her acting. She seemed to be the least developed character.
My last kudos goes to set designer Michele Spadaro who created an apartment that I wanted to move into. Women or Nothing plays until October 6th, definitely worth checking out if you're in New York City.
Writing Update--No work done on the novel this week. No excuses, just no work.
Monday, I tried to re-write a paragraph. The frustration was too great. The results too crappy. So that went straight to the bin.
Starting this new temp gig has had me on overdrive at work with very little brain power at night. I've been going on fumes and now that it's almost Friday...I'm looking forward to this long weekend for some much needed writing time.
I've also been dealing with some health issues. Nothing so dire to land me in the hospital but just enough of a nuisance to make me make an appearance with my primary doctor. Follow up visits to ensue next week to get test results.
I'm going to keep this one short and sweet. Have a great holiday weekend.
Peace,
Lily~
I write and I paint. Then I try to articulate some coherent thoughts about the creative process on this blog. In between those moments of producing work, I take photos, listen to groovy music, watch indie movies, read (a lot), go hear live music (preferably someone that rocks), go to the theater to see a new play from time to time, watch sci-fi movies, and continue to cultivate my curiosity. Then I write about that too.
